With all the aspirations, a bird has flown,
Conquering the obstacles, those mountains and winds have shown.
A difficult journey she started testing her will power,
Targeting her lonely patience every hour.
With the courage embedded in her soul,
She is a free mind with thoughts on a roll.
Fearless, carefree she seems to be,
Deep inside there are always tsunamis in the sea.
Steps were taken aback at times,
When family weighed heavier than thoughts as signs.
The target was never forgotten, the smile was never gone,
She knew the fact, ‘To Achieve’ the show must go on.
That dark thunderous night, fighting the ghost of the weathers,
She lost eveything, along with her beautiful feathers.
She was broken down and deep,
A friend’s voice rose, ‘lets get that creep’.
Strong she was, just needing that hope,
She started again with a win as her only scope.
Fiercely she rose, winnning over the sky,
She flew too sharp, the ghosts couldn’t even spy.
All those thoughts, still running through the bloods,
Here she goes piercing through the floods.
Let me reach my skies where I’ll get my fame,
You only visualize my small conquests, just wait for my Big Game.
Jitin
(Bird referred to as Girl)
Way too good Jitin..
You nailed it!
Keep writing. Waiting to read more 🙂
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Thank you dear. Inspiration matters, lets see what i see next to be carved in words😊😊😊
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Good luck 🙂
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Amazing read.
Very well described!
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Thank you☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Beautyfully penned d image.in dt image has remind me my lovely daughter who is far from me because of her study.girls r too like birds.weldone,dear.
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Thank you dear! I was watching a video a few days ago from wherethis birds n girls thought arose. God bless your daughter!
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A lot of thanks n welcome.
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Brilliant stuff.. keep up the awesome work… Cheerio.
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Thanks!! Cheers👍🏻
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Lovly 🙂
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Thank you Monika 🙂
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Beautiful and touching…every poem you write is so deep, so meaningful, expressing an inner beauty and an impressive talent. Thank you for sharing these treasures with the world! And thank you for following my blog, it means more than words can say!
Blessings,
Claudia
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Thank you so much! Thanks for stopping by and your pleasant words! Much appreciated!
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Wow ! What a wonderful poem.. loved it 😃
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Thank you so much pooja! ☺️
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Nicely penned down. Thanks for following me. Keep writing and stay in touch 🙂
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Thanks Pradita! I look forward to see more of your writings too! 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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This is beautiful! I would have super liked it, if possible👍😊
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Yours words mean a lot to me! Thanks so much!! Appreciated! 🙂
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It’s a blessed few who can create magic with the written word!
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This time i would have super liked your comment if i could! Thanks again, you got me a big smile! God bless u
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Nice nice
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Thank you Shraddha for stopping by!!!
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Most welcome
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Beautifully written 🌹
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Thank you!!!!
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Each word. *-*
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Thank you Shweta!!
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Astounding piece of work.
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Thank you so much asha! I am glad that you liked it, much appreciated☺️☺️
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Beautifully penned.
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Thank you friend for stopping by and your kind words!!
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Excellent poetry! Thank you so much for the follow.
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Thank you Eugenia☺️
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I love this!😊
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Just tried to give a thought and see from a girl’s eyes! Thank you!☺️
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Courageous Wonderful Poetry. Great Work!
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Thank you Gaurav! Feels good to know that!☺️
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I love your writing style❤
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Thank you friend! And what’s my style?
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Smooth 😊
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☺️☺️ i doubt that
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HI, Jitin! Thanks for linking my post on how healthy is watermelon and for following my blog. I am enjoying my visit to yours. Liked That Girl!!!
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Thank you Tony. Much appreciated! I look forward to read more of your posts being benefitial for everyone.☺️
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Dude its just…… speechless.
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Thank you Anurag. ☺️
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poetic expression in true sense bro
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Thanks for your appreciation bro👍🏻
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Beautiful posts!!
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Thank you for your post my friend☺️
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Most welcome ☺
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This is my favorite stanza:
“With the courage embedded in her soul,
She is a free mind with thoughts on a roll.
Fearless, carefree she seems to be,
Deep inside there are always tsunamis in the sea.”
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Really glad to know that you liked it! A very few take out time to appreciate, thank you! ☺️☺️
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Good luck
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Thank you☺️
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Thanks
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Thanks for sharing
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I am glad to know that you liked it☺️
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Thanks
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Beautifully penned…
hope to stay connected with you and read a lot more.
https://valoniapiresblog.wordpress.com
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Thank you friend..sure
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Thanks for following my blog, which is much appreciated.
Best wishes from Norfolk, Pete.
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Lovely poetry here. And many thanks for following our Biker’s Guide to the Dordogne! 🙂
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Thank you Jude ☺️…look forward to read all your posts👍🏻
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Thank you too Jitin 😊
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Great to meet you Jitin. Your words are full of wonderful imagery.
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Same here Miriam☺️ i tried seeing the world from a girl’s eye and i kind of felt blind. Really hard to see the world from someone else’s vision. And yes, you have a beautiful name ☺️☺️
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What a pretty poem 🙂
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Thank you ☺️
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Interesting post, Jitin. Thanks for stopping by my blog and following. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you Susanne. Look forward to read more of your posts☺️
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Nice! 😉
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Thank you Mel
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Adventurous and courageous bird! The beauty of a woman. Lovely poem, Jitin!👍👍
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Thanks a lot for your lovely words🤘🏻🤘🏻
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You are welcome!👍
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This is so perceptive, and I love the positive tone it ends on 🙂
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And thats all what matters, ‘the end’, roaring high in the sky. Thank you for your kind words☺️
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I LOVE THIS PIECE. EXCELLENT!
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Thank you so much☺️, this was the most difficult one too
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Beautifully written. Love the deep emotions shown in this poem.
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Thank you friend☺️
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