Success
Success Success where have you been,
Leaving me lonely, when I’ve been so keen.
A mind is stressed, a body is distressed.
A world of thoughts waiting to be addressed.
Negative spirit of thoughts entangled in the maze,
Sight obstructed by the path covered with dense haze.
With the cruelty of hardships, facing every moment,
Miguiding the mind, being just inches away from the accomplishment.
Every small step I take, trembled in fear,
The hope is alive, you will surely appear.
I keep my aim steady, up and high,
You (Success) can’t betray me, I am born to fly.
With my simplest thought, you presented the toughtest abbreviation,
You can’t run from a man, with failure as his biggest motivation.
I might be lost, entangled in your quest,
Wait! Hold your smile, you still haven’t seen my best.
You see me as a common man, running for his daily butter and bread,
Your deep vision still lacks to see, the positivity in my head.
The day I’ll reach the peak of my glories,
I bet, you (Success) will be the narrator of my stories.
After seeing that smiling face and head crowned with victory,
Everything will be looked over, as the failures just being history.
Bathed in the pride of achievement, with surrounding eyes astonished,
I’ll give my soul, the world that I’ve always promised.
Waiting to see and dying to hear,
“We are the proud parents, you have done it my dear.”
With every fight that I lose, with every wrong step I take, with every wrong door I access,
Somewhere down and deep I am heading towards my Success.
Jitin
It’s a lovely piece. Emotions well expressed.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
👌👌👌
Well ✒ penned😘❤❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Amazing lines”i am borne to fly…….i bet u(success)will be narrator of my stories..”positve attitude’s person never fails.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Exactly! Never settle before you get it. Thank you
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah.bt we should try for dt.
LikeLike
Yeah.u r right.
LikeLike
Jitin, what is success?? We keep on running after it but actually we have probably already achieved it..
LikeLiked by 2 people
But I am no poet or philosopher. Just a person who ran after success now i stopped as I know what i am.. So I ask you what is success
LikeLiked by 2 people
For me it is a journey! You keep giving yourself a new destination(challenge) to reach and accomplish…and with every accomplishment your definition of success keeps on varying. Altogether, you carry for yourself a bag full of joyous success stories which gives you internal satisfsction and movtive to live☺️☺️
LikeLike
Dont deny the fact though! But the definition of success keeps on changing with every accomplishment!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Lovely poem with ups and downs. The story of success for sure.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much friend☺️👍🏻
LikeLiked by 1 person
Good blog
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you friend!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great poem man 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you friend!!☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wonderfully done and full of positivity.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you Miriam for your kind words! It was just a small effort to define such a big word ‘success’.
LikeLike
The road to success is an intriguing journey. Beautifully written, Jitin!👍👍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Success is really hard to define☺️ thanks for stopping by..appreciate that.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome!👍
LikeLike